Write poetry off of the following: Numbness=electric shock=electric ray=explosive device=underwater missile
See, see the electric shock sky Marvel at its big explosive device depths. Tell me, Ba do you Wonder why the dugong ignores you? Why its foobly stare makes you feel electric shock. I can tell you, it is Worried by your Dreezle facial growth That looks like A cheesesteak. What's more, it knows Your underwater missle potting shed Smells of electric ray. Everything under the big electric shock sky Asks why, why do you even bother? You only charm numbnesss.
One not randomly generated this time. Arnold's Secret Weapon A poeum, by Braud Kennuyeu Like a winter's pond I am alone, unmoving Stilled with a numbness An electric shock Causes this foul condition Why have I been struck? It is the mad Ba! His electric ray dancing maiming the masses A harsh diversion? Another plan, what is that? Explosive device! The dolphins shall cry An underwater missle The world sees first frost
Numbness hit me like a rock I blame the electric shock When inventing the electric ray The explosive device of the day I danced all the while It was hit by an underwater missile A true masterpeice of its kind, if I do say so myself
Made this a quick exercise. Thematically sloppy and "underwater missile" doesn't quite work, but here it is. [b:da2714c166]Park[/b:da2714c166] (A New Fountain) My morning Eden wakes abused. Names, numbness on a plaque, And ancient vanities are fused. The sun is an electric shock, Running open every crack. Electric rays on cold rock. Here our ceaseless modern game, Culture as explosive device, Explores its destructive frame. On the old and familiar gristle The new fountain tries to excise, Each drop is an underwater missile.
Those are all better than anything I could have come up with. CY's pretty much described how I feel this morning. Can I still be nitpicky and ask wether "gristle" and "missile" rhyme at all? (i know, I know... "But... it doesn't rhyme!" I don't deserve to read poetry...)
[quote:ffee9a6c9f="Hsing"]Can I still be nitpicky and ask wether "gristle" and "missile" rhyme at all? (i know, I know... "But... it doesn't rhyme!" I don't deserve to read poetry...)[/quote:ffee9a6c9f] It all depends on what accent you have... In some american accents it rhymes, in some british accents it doesn't even sound vaguely similar. Anywhere in between, it sounds similar enough to be not to awful
It depends. In General American it's a perfect rhyme, but in Received Pronunciation (the general academic standard for British English) it's a half-rhyme. Edit to add: [quote:238f16d7b9="Hsing"]CY's pretty much described how I feel this morning.[/quote:238f16d7b9] I'm shamefully glad at this (since that can't have been a nice morning).
